FFF Borrow

It’s a new year, and we have a new host for Flash Fiction Friday!  Click over to see what Tom of Three Spelling Mistakes, and other tremendous writers, made of this photo!  Post your own story!  My take is below.

Here’s this week’s challenge:

Word Limit: 200
Bonus Words: +50 if you tell us about a threesome fantasy… +100 if it really happened.
Required Word: Borrow
Forbidden Word: Forever

Extra Credit: Write one story from each character’s perspective. 
I was getting out of my last meeting of the day when my best buddy called.  I stepped into my office, loosened my tie and closed the door as he questioned me without preamble. 
Are you alone? 
Get over here. 
What?  Are you in trouble? 
No. You have to meet someone.
Get a pen to write down the address. 
I found the one! [He read me her address – a swank condo building.]
A pro? 
Why do you want me there? 
You’re going to borrow her. 
Say what? 
I paid for 5 hours – there are 2 hours left.  
I can’t just… 
You can. 
I don’t want her to see. 
I’ll take care of that. 
Do I need to bring anything? 
Can I shower there?
Oh yes.  
What about that Scotch? 
She has it. 
What should I do with her? 
That thing with the vibrator? 
Oh yeah. 
What about… 
Whatever you want. 
Does she know how to… 
Are you in your car? 
Can I kiss her? 
Of course. 
Are you going to stay? 
No.  I’ll just get her ready and you can take over? 
Okay.  See you soon! 

5 thoughts on “FFF Borrow

  1. Tom says:

    Heh. Reminds me of that joke, “You can fuck me for $100 an hour.” “But what are we going to do for the other 58 minutes?” Smart use of your borrowed time!

  2. Sillyone says:

    I like the pre-story aspect, explaining how they got to that point in the picture. Well done!

  3. Advizor54 says:

    Now that is how best friends should act. Great set-up, wonderful exchange, good work!

  4. Measha Stone says:

    I wonder if women ever do this for each other or do we have too many jealousy issues? Fun read this week, thanks for sharing it with us.

  5. Stories told through dialogue always interest me, I’ve never done one. And now I’m curious about the vibrator thing…what was it?

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