Here’s the Flash Fiction Friday challenge from Advizor54’s bodacious blog. Click over there to see what he and other bloggers wrote about this fun photo!
Word Max = 200 Word Min = 200 Bonus Words – None
Extra Credit – See above Key Phrase – None – Just tell me a story
Let’s keep it tight folks.
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My fourth day on vacation. My fourth chance to sip coffee in a cafe before my wife wakes up, and watch people. Every morning there’s a beautiful older woman at the red door across the way. She doesn’t knock… she waits. Eventually the door swings open… not revealing who is inside. Each day, I make up a different story about her, who she is seeing and why… a maid, a governess, a paramour? My imagination runs wild.
Today she’s late. She fidgets… shows off her beautiful ass! I’m riveted. She sits on the stoop… pulls her knees up… quite a show! The men at the next table comment in Spanish – words I don’t know but they aren’t kind.
She finally strolls over the cafe. The owner hands her a steaming cup. She plunks down in the chair opposite me.
“Tourista?” She asks. Ugh.
“Si,” I nod and wink, feeling bold.
“Hilton?” she fishes for my lodging. I shake my head, pointing West, naming a small bed & breakfast place near the beach about 10 blocks away. She smiles. I am enchanted.
She points up the hill in the other direction. “Mi casa,” she whispers. She rises and takes my hand.
Si! It pays to speak the lingo for the locals…. But I think eye contact and a bulging crotch are international…..
A fun take on the picture, a great imagination, and a huge thumbs up for being option #2.
He must be an Ivy League guy!
What trouble men can get into on vacation in a strange town, in a strange country, in a strange neighborhood!!
What a bold temptress, like her immensely
Seriously outgoing girl.
I like her. 🙂